11/11/2012 05:16:40 am

I do think that if someone has a flaw so big, it can change someones life for the bad.

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11/12/2012 12:54:27 am

I think your theme and your layout were well thought out. I liked them both.
You needed to cite your quotes and I think a little more information on the authors would have been nice. but overall I thought it was really good.

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11/12/2012 06:00:05 am

I like your theme Blayke!
I especially liked your explanation of the flaws of the characters that you used because it made me see how some of their flaws didn't seem that big when reading, but if you really think about it, it really was the leading cause to their downfall. Nice Job!

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11/12/2012 07:10:47 am

I really, really, really love your layout. It's very creative and well-organized. I can understand how your theme relates to each work and other works that you didn't have to mention. It really got me thinking about how these characters really did have flaws that contributed to their downfalls. In a way, by stating this theme, you showed the characters humanity, even through the evil deeds they might have done. Good job, Blayke.

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11/12/2012 09:00:59 am

I agree with your theme very much. One big mistake can cause a huge downfall and can ruin a person. And one thing, on the comment page it's kinda hard to read the others comments, so maybe a different font color would fix that. But overall great website!

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11/12/2012 09:47:16 am

Flaws are in everyone. The works you chose really showed that even in the most triumphant works the things we use to build us up can be our downfall.

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11/12/2012 09:58:35 am

You did a great job explaining how your theme relates to each work! I felt like your theme was unique, and wasn't similar to any others I've looked at tonight. I really liked how you explained the time periods on the home page too; it gave some insight to the works before actually reading about them.

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11/12/2012 10:03:38 am

I really loved both your website and your theme. The theme is definitly true and i think you used very good supporting evidence. Your explanations tied in all your works to your theme very well.

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    Blayke Kortman

    Just another kid in an AP Language class.